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Dancing with the Fireflies.

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you would believe your eyes
if ten million fireflies 
lit up the world as i fell asleep

Oh how I love pink in flower-pictures. :giggle: 

:camera: A7R | 200mm | 1/160s | f/2.8 | ISO 1000

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

This image is well exposed good limited depth of field. However, the way it is presented it kind of overwhelms the eyes a little bit. With so many flowers of varying degrees of focus, the few sharp flowers tend to get lost in it. I would re-crop the image to focus more on the flowers which are in focus. Try not to put them in the direct center because that makes the composition a little static. In images like this the rule of thirds works best to provide the most effective composition. I also darkened the image just a little bit and added some contrast to saturate the colors a bit. It is personal taste but I will often vignette the corners just a bit because it draws the eyes more into the center.

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Keep up the good work!